My favorite actor.
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학생 제출 원문
I like 원빈 the most. who is Korean actor.
He is talented and handsome
I like his movies and I think he has a strong character in his movies.
Recently he got divorced and the split must be tough for me but he does his best in a new movie.
I think that is professionalism.
I think he is a great actor because
Last week, I watched his movie; it had everything such as an exciting story line, great actions, and so on.
I think he know how to entertain the fans. I really like him so much.
Next time, His new movie release, I will go to see a movie with my wife who likes him too.
I think…. That’s about it.
He is talented and handsome
I like his movies and I think he has a strong character in his movies.
Recently he got divorced and the split must be tough for me but he does his best in a new movie.
I think that is professionalism.
I think he is a great actor because
Last week, I watched his movie; it had everything such as an exciting story line, great actions, and so on.
I think he know how to entertain the fans. I really like him so much.
Next time, His new movie release, I will go to see a movie with my wife who likes him too.
I think…. That’s about it.
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