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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 13 조회 13137

My Weekends.

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I usually go with my wife on weekends even though I’m exhausted from working the whole week.
There is nothing like a good chat with my wife to relieve the stress. Once we start talking, we talk for hours about our company, future plan and such. We both work so that it is easy for us to understand one's stress from work place. I like going to Han River because there are many flowers and trees which make me feel better. It is always woderful to have a lunch on the grass watching kids playing with smile. They make me think having my kid. But sometimes, I just stay at home and order a fried chicken or pizza delivered while watching a movie. To tell the truth, whatever I do on weekends if my wife stay with me that is just all I want.
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Great job, David!

I usually spend time with my wife on weekends, even though I’m exhausted from working the whole week.
There is nothing like a good chat with my wife to relieve stress. Once we start talking, we talk for hours about our company, future plans, and so on. We both work, so it is easy for us to understand each other's stress. I like going to the Han River, because there are many flowers and trees, which make me feel better. It is always wonderful having lunch on the grass, watching kids playing and smiling. They make me think about having kids. But sometimes I just stay home, order fried chicken or pizza, and watch a movie. To tell the truth, I don't really care what I do on weekends as long as I'm with my wife.

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