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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 15 조회 13239

My Favorite Actor.

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My favorite actor is Jack Nicholson. He is 80 years old and was born in New Jersey. He starred in BatMan, As Good as It Gets and had the supporting role in How Do You Know. He also has won Academy Award for Best Actor two times and got nominated several times. The first movie I saw him was BatMan. in the movie, he played creepy and insane Joker, and because his acting was so real my younger brother wet his pants at theater. But he can play diverse character types such as crazy murderer and funny old guy. Of course, Not all movies he starred are good, but I am just satisfied with enjoying his play. It is pity that he is getting older so that the time we can see him is getting less. One day, I want to meet him in person and take a photo together.
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Great job, David. I also like Jack Nicholson. He's a fantastic actor. I really liked him in The Departed.

My favorite actor is Jack Nicholson. He is 80 years old and was born in New Jersey. He starred in Batman, As Good as It Gets, and had the supporting role in How Do You Know. He also has won Academy Awards for Best Actor two times and got nominated several times. The first movie I saw him was Batman. In the movie, he played the creepy and insane Joker, and because his acting was so real, my younger brother wet his pants in the theater. But he can play diverse character types such as crazy murderer and funny old guy. Of course, Not all movies he starred are good, but I am just satisfied with enjoying his acting. It is a pity that he is getting older, so that the time we can see him is getting less. One day, I want to meet him in person and take a photo together.

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