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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Police officers have done lits of things.
Their main duties keep citizens safe and maintain public order.
First of all, traffic policeman tries to maintain traffic order during traffic jam for rush hour.
If the accident happens and the road are messy, police oficers handle the occasions quickly to improve traffic flow.
Secondly, they are doing the activies of crime prevention.
They patrol around the town and guide the juvenile delinquents to prevent crime.
Lastly, they always handle various accidents and incidents like fraud,theft, murder and so on.
Now, society is getting more complicated and there are person’s various interests.
Police officers’duties also become fragmented depending on the time
Their main duties keep citizens safe and maintain public order.
First of all, traffic policeman tries to maintain traffic order during traffic jam for rush hour.
If the accident happens and the road are messy, police oficers handle the occasions quickly to improve traffic flow.
Secondly, they are doing the activies of crime prevention.
They patrol around the town and guide the juvenile delinquents to prevent crime.
Lastly, they always handle various accidents and incidents like fraud,theft, murder and so on.
Now, society is getting more complicated and there are person’s various interests.
Police officers’duties also become fragmented depending on the time
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