My Best Friend
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My best friend is JaeYoung, Han. We became friends because we were in the college jazz band. At that time it is hard to find someone who enjoys and plays jazz so I had always been looking for a friend who can share my interest. He and I both like Oscar Peterson, the legendary jazz pianist and moreover we have played diffrent musical instrument. It was fantastic memory that I played a saxophone to the accompaniment of his piano. Also, we lived in the same dormitory and same room. Everyday we chatted away about music, girls and future plan. It is unbelievable that the time we were together is only a year. After second semester, he had to move to another country following his father who is a missionary. However we kept in touch for two years and when he got back to Korea, we became the best fiend again.I’m so lucky to have a friend like him.
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