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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 20 조회 13390

My Best Friend

작성자: 1102237671 담당 튜터: Hunter1
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My best friend is JaeYoung, Han. We became friends because we were in the college jazz band. At that time it is hard to find someone who enjoys and plays jazz so I had always been looking for a friend who can share my interest. He and I both like Oscar Peterson, the legendary jazz pianist and moreover we have played diffrent musical instrument. It was fantastic memory that I played a saxophone to the accompaniment of his piano. Also, we lived in the same dormitory and same room. Everyday we chatted away about music, girls and future plan. It is unbelievable that the time we were together is only a year. After second semester, he had to move to another country following his father who is a missionary. However we kept in touch for two years and when he got back to Korea, we became the best fiend again.I’m so lucky to have a friend like him.
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Wow! That sounds great, David. It's wonderful to have a close friend with similar interests :)

My best friend is JaeYoung, Han. We became friends, because we were in the college jazz band. At that time, it was hard to find someone who enjoys and plays jazz, so I had always been looking for a friend who could share my interest. He and I both like Oscar Peterson, the legendary jazz pianist, and moreover, we have played diffrent musical instruments. It was a fantastic memory that I played saxophone to the accompaniment of his piano. Also, we lived in the same dormitory and same room. Everyday we chatted away about music, girls, and future plans. It is unbelievable that the time we were together is only a year. After the second semester, he had to move to another country with his father who is a missionary. However, we kept in touch for two years, and when he got back to Korea, we became best fiends again. I’m so lucky to have a friend like him.

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