help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Several years ago. one warm spring day, my husband and I went on an exeursion by car.
He drove along the local Road, but the Road was first-lane and the car in front of us drove slowly and we also followed that car.
But we would like to pass ahead the car and my husband violated the center line to gain speed.
The traffic policeman showed up unexpectedly and let our car stopped.
We got a traffic ticket and blamed the car driver in front of.
We spoiled our excited mood to enjoy spring festival.
Although I don’t remember the amount of fine, we were continuously irritated about accidents and were waste of money
He drove along the local Road, but the Road was first-lane and the car in front of us drove slowly and we also followed that car.
But we would like to pass ahead the car and my husband violated the center line to gain speed.
The traffic policeman showed up unexpectedly and let our car stopped.
We got a traffic ticket and blamed the car driver in front of.
We spoiled our excited mood to enjoy spring festival.
Although I don’t remember the amount of fine, we were continuously irritated about accidents and were waste of money
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