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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Korea consists of mountains. Over eighty percents of territory is mountainous area.
The famous mountains are Seorak, Halla and Naejang mountain.
The changing colors of the leaves in mountains are beautiful and they have many cultural relics.
Korea is surrounded by three seas : Eastern, Western and Southern Sea.
The number of island is over three thousand.
Most of them are uninhabited. Eastern and Western Sea are not deep and people who live in the area make money engaging in aquaculture like oyster, seeweed, see squirt.
There are many rivers in korea. Han, Natdong, Gum, Youngsan river flow along the cities and supply water around living people.
The famous mountains are Seorak, Halla and Naejang mountain.
The changing colors of the leaves in mountains are beautiful and they have many cultural relics.
Korea is surrounded by three seas : Eastern, Western and Southern Sea.
The number of island is over three thousand.
Most of them are uninhabited. Eastern and Western Sea are not deep and people who live in the area make money engaging in aquaculture like oyster, seeweed, see squirt.
There are many rivers in korea. Han, Natdong, Gum, Youngsan river flow along the cities and supply water around living people.
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