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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 12 조회 16082

Start writing in English

작성자: 1100295986 담당 튜터: Ian
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi Ian!

I made a decision to write something in English to improve my English skill.

I know learning English takes time, but I sometimes get frustraed.
However, I'm in luck, you're my teacher.
I always appreciate your passionate teaching.
I believe I can speak English very fluently someday.

Thank you,
Dong-Moon Kim
튜터 교정 답변

[CORRECTION]

Hi Ian!

I made a decision to write something in English to improve my English skill.

--> I have made a decision to write something in English to improve my English skills.

I know learning English takes time, but I sometimes get frustraed.

--> I know that learning English takes time, but I sometimes get frustraed frustrated.

However, I'm in luck, you're my teacher.

--> However, I'm in luck because you're my teacher.

I always appreciate your passionate teaching. (Good Sentence ^^)

I believe I can speak English very fluently someday. (Good Sentence ^^)

Thank you, Dong-Moon Kim (Good Sentence ^^)

 

[COMMENT]

Dear Moon,

I commend your perseverance and hard work. It also humbles me to know you appreciate my teaching. I know sometimes I tend to push you a bit hard with my corrections and suggestions. I hope you understand that my purpose for doing so is because I have high hopes in you. Fast-learning yet humble students like you really inspire me to strive harder in delivering effecitive and efficient teaching strategies and techniques to help improve my students' English communication skills. Kudos also for trying to work on your writing skill. If ever you have any questions or problems regarding our topics or about the class, please feel free to ask me. Keep up the good work!

 

Teacher Ian ^^

 

 

  

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