Hotel in Korea 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Let me tell you about my memorable exprience in a hotel. I went to china for going on a vocation in last April. I went to there with my friend. We was staing for three days in Cristal Hotel which is located in Tainjin. That is sothen part of Bajing in China. The hotel was 5 star. The hotel was so great and beautiful. We went to China to travel Baiging and to see a TaiSan. First night, I felt cold in my room. So I told hotel reprsentative why my room had quite cold. Even thought I sat up temperature controller higher, a room couldn't hot. At first, we couldn't comunicate well. I couldn't speak China well. They couldn't speak English well. So I used te be body language. And then, I recognized that China governent stop heating in Aprile. However, I thought I couldn't sleep with cold. So I got Electric Heater from the Hotel. So I fall a sleep well. If you plan to travel to China in Aprile, I don't recommand to you.
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