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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 25 조회 13491

Hotel in Korea 2

작성자: 87316 담당 튜터: Sheryl
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Let me tell you about my memorable exprience in a hotel. I went to china for going on a vocation in last April. I went to there with my friend. We was staing for three days in Cristal Hotel which is located in Tainjin. That is sothen part of Bajing in China. The hotel was 5 star. The hotel was so great and beautiful. We went to China to travel Baiging and to see a TaiSan. First night, I felt cold in my room. So I told hotel reprsentative why my room had quite cold. Even thought I sat up temperature controller higher, a room couldn't hot. At first, we couldn't comunicate well. I couldn't speak China well. They couldn't speak English well. So I used te be body language. And then, I recognized that China governent stop heating in Aprile. However, I thought I couldn't sleep with cold. So I got Electric Heater from the Hotel. So I fall a sleep well. If you plan to travel to China in Aprile, I don't recommand to you.
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Let me tell you about my memorable exprience in a hotel. I went to China for a vocation last April. I went there with my friend. We stayed for three days in Cristal Hotel which is located in Tainjin. That is in southern part of Beijing, China. The hotel is a 5 star hotel. The hotel was so great and beautiful. We went to China to travel in Beijing and to see TaiSan. In my first night, I felt cold in my room. So I told the hotel representative why my room was quite cold. Even though, I sat on a temperature controller higher, the room wasn't getting hotter. At first, we couldn't communicate well. I couldn't speak Chinese well. They couldn't speak English well. So I used body language. And then, I learned that China stopped summer season in April. However, I thought I couldn't sleep with a very cold temperature. So I got an electric heater from the hotel. So I fell asleep well. If you have a plan to travel to China, I don't recommend you to travel there on April.

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