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Wow! You are living in Thiland.
I’ve interested in your country for a long time and I wonder what the country is.
First, I’ve heared that the floating marketing is so famous place.
Which place is ths best market to foreign visitors like me?
Secondly, I would like to tour the King’s Palace if I visit Bangkok.
How do I get to there? Could we get to there by public transportation like subway and bus?
Thirdly, can you recommend a good restaurant to see the downtown view with my family?
Lastly, your country is hot and there is also rainy season.
Which month do I visit your country the best?
I’d like to know about your country very much.
If you answer my questions, I’d be grateful to you
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Great job, Rose! Very inquisitive :)

Wow! You are living in Thiland?
I’ve been interested in your country for a long time, and I wonder what it's like.
First, I’ve heared that the floating market is very famous.
Which place is the best market for foreign visitors like me?
Secondly, I would like to tour the King’s Palace if I visit Bangkok.
How do I get to there? Could we get there by public transportation like subway or bus?
Thirdly, can you recommend a good restaurant to see the downtown view with my family?
Lastly, your country is hot and there is also a rainy season.
Which month is best for visiting?
I’d like to know about your country very much.
If you answer my questions, I’d be grateful to you.

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