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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 28 조회 13260

help, please

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Hello, this is a guest who bought a pair of sneakers last weekend from your online mall and they were delivered yesterday.
I put on them but they were too big and their color was mistaken what I ordered.
Can I speak to someone in charge of service?
What you’ve just heared about my calling is about your product which I ordered.
I surely ordered a pair of sneakers usual size with black color.
But other product was delivered.
I don't know why this happens.
I have to put on sneakers this weekend’s marathon tournament.
Once in a while, this situation occurs but this time, it's too late exchange other product so I should refund them.
Can you help me?
If you would like to have time, please call back to me as soon as possible, thanks.
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Great job, Rose!

Hello, I am a customer who bought a pair of sneakers last weekend from your online mall, and they were delivered yesterday.
I put them on, but they were too big, and the color was not what I ordered.
Can I speak to someone in customer service?
What you’ve just heard is about your product I ordered.
I surely ordered a pair of black sneakers in my usual size, but another product was delivered.
I don't know why this happens.
I have to wear sneakers this weekend for a marathon.
Once in a while, this situation occurs, but this time it's too late to exchange them for another product, so I should refund them.
Can you help me?
If you would like to have time, please call back to me as soon as possible, thanks.

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