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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 28 조회 12745

Recycling 1

작성자: 87316 담당 튜터: Sheryl
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Recycling is mandatory in my country. Also that is ordinary. First, recyclable waste must be put in separate trash bin labeled with Plastic, Paper, Glass, Plastic bags and so on. It is common to see Kerean people trown them away on designated area on the designated days. Usually we have to recycle once a week. In my case, I have to recycle wedensday. Second, general wastes should be placed in special garbage bags. We called Jongyangje bag. We pay it from supermaket or convinece store. Lastly, food wasts must be put in separate trash bin. And We can see the weight at the display pannel on trash bin. Later we pay it about weight of food wasts. Recycling is necesery and useful our envirenment. Since we have to keep recycling. At last, It is for ourselves.
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Recycling is mandatory in my country. Also, that is common. First, recyclable waste must be put in separate trash bin labeled with Plastic, Paper, Glass, Plastic bags and so on. It is common to see Korean people throwing garbages away on designated area on the designated days. Usually we have to recycle once a week. In my case, I have to recycle on Wednesdays. Second, general wastes should be placed in special garbage bags. We called Jongyangje bag. We buy it on a supermaket or convenience store. Lastly, food wastes must be put in separate trash bin. And we can see the weight at the display panel on a trash bin. Later, we pay for it for the weight of food wastes. Recycling is necessary and useful in our environment. So, we have to keep recycling. After all, it is for ourselves.

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