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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 01 조회 12278

help,please

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Hello, Jun. this is youngsook speaking.
I had a big fault about you. you may be angry at me but I'll tell you frankly.
You know that I borrowed a pair of pants from you to go to the Sunhee's birthday party.
Last night I wore them and participated party.
When I was talking to Sunhee with a glass of juice, someone was walking backward and hit to me.
I was shocked and I dropped glass and paints were stained by juice.
I know that you cherish the clothes so I try to compensate about damage.
I'll pay you cost of clothes to buy same ones.
Or I'll take them to the dry cleaners to remove stains.
Any choice do what you want.
I'm so sorry about it. Please don't hurt.
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Great job, Rose. Please review the edits below :)

Hello, Jun. This is Youngsook speaking.
I mae a mistake that involves you. You may be angry at me, but I'll tell you frankly.
You know that I borrowed a pair of pants from you to go to Sunhee's birthday party.
Last night I wore them to the party.
When I was talking to Sunhee with a glass of juice, someone was walking backward and hit me.
I was shocked. I dropped the glass, and the pants were stained by the juice.
I know that you cherish your clothes, so I will try to compensate you for the damage.
I'll pay you the cost of the clothes, so you can buy the same ones.
Or I'll take them to the dry cleaners to remove the stains.
It's up tp you.
I'm so sorry. Please don't be angry.

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