Hi ~ Cee!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, Cee~
How are you today?
It's raining here. So I'm feeling blue.
By the way, last time I said the wrong.
I'm not 40 years old, I'm 50 years old.
And I am a youth counselor.
When you called the last time, I couldn't hear your voice clearly beacause of your voice resounded on the phone.
This time, I hope that your voice sounds exactly the way.
I hope we have a good relationship in the future .
Thank you. See you again~!
How are you today?
It's raining here. So I'm feeling blue.
By the way, last time I said the wrong.
I'm not 40 years old, I'm 50 years old.
And I am a youth counselor.
When you called the last time, I couldn't hear your voice clearly beacause of your voice resounded on the phone.
This time, I hope that your voice sounds exactly the way.
I hope we have a good relationship in the future .
Thank you. See you again~!
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!