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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 03 조회 12739

Hi ~ Cee!

작성자: darakwon_kicom561 담당 튜터: Cen2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, Cee~
How are you today?
It's raining here. So I'm feeling blue.

By the way, last time I said the wrong.
I'm not 40 years old, I'm 50 years old.
And I am a youth counselor.

When you called the last time, I couldn't hear your voice clearly beacause of your voice resounded on the phone.
This time, I hope that your voice sounds exactly the way.

I hope we have a good relationship in the future .
Thank you. See you again~!
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CORRECTION:

Hi, Cee~
How are you today?
It's raining here. So
, I'm feeling blue.

By the way, I said
something wrong last time.
I'm not 40 years old, I'm 50 years old.
And
, I am a Youth Counselor.

When you called the last time, I couldn't hear your voice clearly
because your voice resounded on the phone.
This time, I hope that your voice sounds exactly
as it is.

I hope we have a good relationship in the future .

Thank you! See you again~!

REPLY:

Hi, Sugyeong!

I'm Cen, (not Cee) your new teacher for this month of May.

You know what, this e-mail seems like it is not for me. Besides, we just talked for the first time earlier tonight. Anyway, thank you for sending this. It's great to know your age and your interesting job. I think your job is tough but I'm sure you are able to handle whatever comes your way.

I hope we get to know each other better as we progress in our class. Just love English. Use it, speak it, apply it.

Have a great night. See you in our next class!

 

your teacher,

Cen

 

 

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