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I enjoy going to the movies with my kid.
The movie theater I often to go is Megabox Chilsung.
It's located in Chilsung-dong and in a shopping mall of one building.
The first basement and ground floor are E-mart.
And second floor is many clothes' stores.
The third floor is cellularphone stores.
The fourth is movie theater.
You can see a ticket booth if you get off elevator or escaltor.
If you would like to buy popcorn and drink, go straight and turn left.
You can find snack bar.
The theater provides spacious rest area.
The ligthing is a little dark to relax.
The reason why I like this movietheater is the sound system and seats are comfortable.
I'll go to the theater with my kid this Children's Day.
The movie theater I often to go is Megabox Chilsung.
It's located in Chilsung-dong and in a shopping mall of one building.
The first basement and ground floor are E-mart.
And second floor is many clothes' stores.
The third floor is cellularphone stores.
The fourth is movie theater.
You can see a ticket booth if you get off elevator or escaltor.
If you would like to buy popcorn and drink, go straight and turn left.
You can find snack bar.
The theater provides spacious rest area.
The ligthing is a little dark to relax.
The reason why I like this movietheater is the sound system and seats are comfortable.
I'll go to the theater with my kid this Children's Day.
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