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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The most memorable movie I have seen is Myeongnyang Battle.
It’s Korean historic movie and non-fiction.
The story is when Japanse invaded Korea in 1592, admiral Yi Sunshin protected our nation.
Admiral Yi was entrapped and put in prison.
But to save his nation, he fought with nine warships against several hundreds Japanese’s worships and he winned the historical victory.
Korean including me have been respecting admiral Yi eagarly.
The leading actor of the movie is Choi minsik. His acting ability is excellent so he is the national actor.
After moving, my kid bought of Myeongnyang and read a book in one sitting.
It’s Korean historic movie and non-fiction.
The story is when Japanse invaded Korea in 1592, admiral Yi Sunshin protected our nation.
Admiral Yi was entrapped and put in prison.
But to save his nation, he fought with nine warships against several hundreds Japanese’s worships and he winned the historical victory.
Korean including me have been respecting admiral Yi eagarly.
The leading actor of the movie is Choi minsik. His acting ability is excellent so he is the national actor.
After moving, my kid bought of Myeongnyang and read a book in one sitting.
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