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The most memorable movie I have seen is Myeongnyang Battle.
It’s Korean historic movie and non-fiction.
The story is when Japanse invaded Korea in 1592, admiral Yi Sunshin protected our nation.
Admiral Yi was entrapped and put in prison.
But to save his nation, he fought with nine warships against several hundreds Japanese’s worships and he winned the historical victory.
Korean including me have been respecting admiral Yi eagarly.
The leading actor of the movie is Choi minsik. His acting ability is excellent so he is the national actor.
After moving, my kid bought of Myeongnyang and read a book in one sitting.
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Great job, Rose. I also watched that movie and really liked it. There was lots action and important historical information :))

The most memorable movie I have seen is Myeongnyang Battle.
It’s Korean historic, non-fiction movie.
The story is when Japanse invaded Korea in 1592, and Admiral Yi Sunshin protected our nation.
Admiral Yi was trapped and put in prison, but he was realeased to save his nation. He fought with only nine warships against several hundred Japanese worships, and he won the historical victory.
Koreans, including me, respect Admiral Yi very much.
The leading actor of the movie is Choi Minsik. His acting ability is excellent, so he is one of the nation's mst famous actors.
After moving, my kid bought Myeongnyang and read the book in one sitting.

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