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Many people go to the movies on weekends or holidays.
There are lots of movie theaters around Taegu.
In the theater, several kinds of movies are shown. It's easy to select what you want to see on the spot.
These days, I haven't seen any impolite people who act strange in public places like the theater.
You can often see some people shouting or littering in the park.
But the public order of Korea is gradually getting better.