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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 07 조회 12748

My mistake

작성자: 1401720 담당 튜터: Morgan1
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Dear Morgan,

Before writing my diary, I have a question.

According to the website, there are two names for you as follows: 1. Morgan, 2. Elizabeth

Then I'm confused by them. I'd like to know your full name.

Today I went to the hospital to cure my back. The time on(?) that I arrived at the hospital was 12:50 pm. However, the hospital have a lunch time from 1 pm to 2 pm. Then I came to a cafe and am waiting until 2 pm. This event made me set my schedule thoroughly.

Thank you.
Sincerely,
Cho
튜터 교정 답변

Cho,

My full name is Elizabeth Morgan. Morgan is my family name. Nice job with your diary entry! I only had to back two small corrections:

Today I went to the hospital to cure my back. The time on(?) that I arrived at the hospital was 12:50 pm. However, the hospital has lunch time from 1 pm to 2 pm. Then I came to a cafe and am waiting until 2 pm. This event made me set my schedule thoroughly.

Thank you,

Elizabeth

 

Dear Morgan,

Before writing my diary, I have a question.

According to the website, there are two names for you as follows: 1. Morgan, 2. Elizabeth

Then I'm confused by them. I'd like to know your full name.

Today I went to the hospital to cure my back. The time on(?) that I arrived at the hospital was 12:50 pm. However, the hospital have a lunch time from 1 pm to 2 pm. Then I came to a cafe and am waiting until 2 pm. This event made me set my schedule thoroughly.

Thank you.
Sincerely,
Cho

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