My mistake
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear Morgan,
Before writing my diary, I have a question.
According to the website, there are two names for you as follows: 1. Morgan, 2. Elizabeth
Then I'm confused by them. I'd like to know your full name.
Today I went to the hospital to cure my back. The time on(?) that I arrived at the hospital was 12:50 pm. However, the hospital have a lunch time from 1 pm to 2 pm. Then I came to a cafe and am waiting until 2 pm. This event made me set my schedule thoroughly.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Cho
Before writing my diary, I have a question.
According to the website, there are two names for you as follows: 1. Morgan, 2. Elizabeth
Then I'm confused by them. I'd like to know your full name.
Today I went to the hospital to cure my back. The time on(?) that I arrived at the hospital was 12:50 pm. However, the hospital have a lunch time from 1 pm to 2 pm. Then I came to a cafe and am waiting until 2 pm. This event made me set my schedule thoroughly.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Cho
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