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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 10 조회 13129

My Project

작성자: 1102013615 담당 튜터: Christie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The most memorable project I’ve ever completed was a team project.
To be specific, It was about planning new product for costumer trend research.
In this project I was in charge of finding a costumer needs and benefit.
And the other team members new product lunching plans and making schedules and so on.
Although we had some difficulty in, meeting the costumer & making a research details.
We worked day&night to make the project successful.
As a result we were very tired at the end but made a huge success.
I still remember this project because I learned a lot of things and it helped my promotion.
It was such a rewarding moment I will never forget.
튜터 교정 답변

The most memorable project I’ve ever completed was a team project.
To be specific, It was about planning a new product for customer trend research.
In this project I was in-charge of finding a costumer needs and benefit.
And the other team members did new product launching plans and making schedules and so on.
However, we had some difficulty in meeting the costumer & making a research details.
We worked day & night to make the project successful.
As a result, we were very tired in the end but made a huge success.
I still remember this project because I learned a lot of things and it helped my promotion.
It was such a rewarding moment I will never forget.

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