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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 10 조회 12951

Hi ~ Cen!

작성자: darakwon_kicom561 담당 튜터: Cen2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Cen ,
Today I heard your cough during the class but I can not ask regards.
Are you OK?
Even though you were sick, you taught me English hard.
I appreciate it.
You look like a warm-hearted person. So I really glad to meet you.
I hope you'll feel better soon.
Let's meet back to a healthy appearance on Thursday
Good night~!^^
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CORRECTION:

Cen,
Today I heard your cough during the class but I wasn't able to ask how you were. Are you OK? Even though you were sick, you taught me English very well. I appreciate it.

You seem like a warm-hearted person. So, I am really glad to meet you.

I hope you'll feel better soon.

Let's meet again with a healthy appearance on Thursday.

Good Night~!^^

REPLY:

Hi, Sugyeong! Thank you for this message. I'm not sick however my throat is kinda sensitive to any food or drink I take.

Anyways, you are thoughtful. If you say that I seem like a warm-hearted person, it is you who's actually one and, I'm glad to have you as one of my students this month. You are eager to learn and you easily understand our lesson. Very bright indeed! ^^

I'm looking forward to talk to you this Thursday.

 

your teacher,

Cen

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