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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 01. 08 조회 14319

Lunch

작성자: 72582 담당 튜터: Julie
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Our lunch break starts at noon and ends at 1 o'clock in the afternoon. By that time, I'm really hungry so I usually run into the restaurant near my office with my co-workers. There are so many restaurants near my office, it is difficult to decide where to eat.
We usually ask each other what they want and choose one. Our favorite restaurant is the one of Chinese restaurant and we almost order the same menu, "champong".
"Champong" is a kind of soup and very spicy. There are a lot of seafood and vegetables with noodle. We eat that menu twice a week and after eating champong everyone is happy to eat champong.
튜터 교정 답변
Our lunch break starts at noon and ends at 1 o'clock in the afternoon. By that time, I'm really hungry so I usually run into the restaurant near my office with my co-workers. There are so many restaurants near my office, it is difficult to decide where to eat. We usually ask each other what they want and choose one. Our favorite is the Chinese restaurant and almost all of us order the same menu, "champong". "Champong" is a kind of soup and its very spicy. There are a lot of seafood and vegetables with noodle. We eat that menu twice a week and after eating champong everyone is happy.
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