I went to a park for a picnic.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I have been to the Lake park with my family last month. Lake park was closed to my apartment, so it took only 10 minutes with my car. We enjoyed a picnic in the park. We prepared a few bottles of drinks in the icebox and some food such as fried chickens and pizza. We also brought a small table, potable chairs and a mat to spread in the shade. After setting the place, I played catch with my children for about half an hour. We had sweat over, so I drank some beer and gave my children cokes from the icebox. And we enjoyed prepared food.
튜터 교정 답변
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