help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In the past, I didn’t like to take a walk.
These days, I try to talk a walk if I have a little time for my health’s improvement.
I don’t have special clothes to walk.
I usually wear a long-sleeved shirts, comfortable pants and sneakers.
If the wind blows or the weather is cold, I put on the jumper.
I don’t like to apply makeup or sunblock and I surly put on a broad brimmed hat.
Presently, it’s not easy to have time doing exercise.
When I go to work, I usually walk wearing suit with my bag and sneakers.
It helps me to improve health and give energy
These days, I try to talk a walk if I have a little time for my health’s improvement.
I don’t have special clothes to walk.
I usually wear a long-sleeved shirts, comfortable pants and sneakers.
If the wind blows or the weather is cold, I put on the jumper.
I don’t like to apply makeup or sunblock and I surly put on a broad brimmed hat.
Presently, it’s not easy to have time doing exercise.
When I go to work, I usually walk wearing suit with my bag and sneakers.
It helps me to improve health and give energy
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