about my work
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'm a senior consultant in the e-Commerce Analytics Group.
I have been working here for the past three months.
My main role is to operate web site of samsung online store.
So I spend a lot of time with computer sitting on the chair.
I try to stretch a waist becuse I've got a slipped disk.
During my lunch break, I usually take a walk with my co workers or drink a cup of coffee with them.
As a computer programmer, my job is to manage a web site of online store.
I am in charge of fix an error or reflect the client's request on the web site.
Recently I develope the birthday coupon system. If the clients of online store meet their birthday,
the web site send the birthday coupon automatically to the clients.
Because I started this job only 2months ago, I'm not used in online shop, but I developed well at last.
After finishing this work, the customers satisfied on online shop and my manager also praise me.
I have been working here for the past three months.
My main role is to operate web site of samsung online store.
So I spend a lot of time with computer sitting on the chair.
I try to stretch a waist becuse I've got a slipped disk.
During my lunch break, I usually take a walk with my co workers or drink a cup of coffee with them.
As a computer programmer, my job is to manage a web site of online store.
I am in charge of fix an error or reflect the client's request on the web site.
Recently I develope the birthday coupon system. If the clients of online store meet their birthday,
the web site send the birthday coupon automatically to the clients.
Because I started this job only 2months ago, I'm not used in online shop, but I developed well at last.
After finishing this work, the customers satisfied on online shop and my manager also praise me.
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