help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I don’t do jogging but I like walking.
If you take a walk, you don’t need to do special warm-up exercise.
Yesterday, I jogged on trial for five minutes and I ached knees and ankles unexpectedly.
Jogging and walking are different in exercise way.
If you jog, you have to do a warm-up like streching to prevent your injuries and put on the sneakers.
After exercise, you had better breathe deeply to relax your body.
If you take a walk, you don’t need to do special warm-up exercise.
Yesterday, I jogged on trial for five minutes and I ached knees and ankles unexpectedly.
Jogging and walking are different in exercise way.
If you jog, you have to do a warm-up like streching to prevent your injuries and put on the sneakers.
After exercise, you had better breathe deeply to relax your body.
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