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help, please

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I don’t do jogging but I like walking.
If you take a walk, you don’t need to do special warm-up exercise.
Yesterday, I jogged on trial for five minutes and I ached knees and ankles unexpectedly.
Jogging and walking are different in exercise way.
If you jog, you have to do a warm-up like streching to prevent your injuries and put on the sneakers.
After exercise, you had better breathe deeply to relax your body.
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Great job, Rose. Review the editied composition :)

I don’t jog, but I like walking.
If you take a walk, you don’t need to do a special warm-up exercise.
Yesterday, I jogged on a trail for five minutes, and my knees and ankles ached unexpectedly.
Jogging and walking are different exercises.
If you jog, you have to do a warm-up like streching to prevent your injuries and put on sneakers.
After exercising, you better breathe deeply to relax your body.

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