help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello Leejun, this is youngsook speaking. How have you been?
I am calling to wonder if you have time.
Why don’t you take a walk with me?
I recently found a good park in my neighborhood, please let me guide you where the place is.
we can enjoy fresh air, spring mood and relax comfortably under a leafy tree.
What do you think of joing me?
If you don’t mind, let’s meet up at suseong park at 10 am this Saturday.
Oh, I see. After walking and relaxing, let’s go to have lunch.
I know popular seafood restaurant.
You can find there where you come across the park. Okay?
See you then. Bye.
I am calling to wonder if you have time.
Why don’t you take a walk with me?
I recently found a good park in my neighborhood, please let me guide you where the place is.
we can enjoy fresh air, spring mood and relax comfortably under a leafy tree.
What do you think of joing me?
If you don’t mind, let’s meet up at suseong park at 10 am this Saturday.
Oh, I see. After walking and relaxing, let’s go to have lunch.
I know popular seafood restaurant.
You can find there where you come across the park. Okay?
See you then. Bye.
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