Camping 3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Once I have desided to go camping, there are amount of things we have to prepare for my camping. First of all, I have to double check the weather which is camping day. The most important in camping day is weather. When I check the weather, I can usually use mobile application. Second, I make sure to pack everything I need. There are a lot of things such as emergency medicine, some tents, the whole set of kitchenware and so on. Lastly, I usually prepare groceries for our dinner party in outside. I like to eat barbecue party in our camping. That's the way I like it. And for I enjoy going camping, I have to make a camping list. Therefor, I can enjoy our camping.
튜터 교정 답변
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