help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As I am a civil servant, I always wear suit so it’s easy to choose clothes.
In the past, I enjoyed wearing bright colors such as red, pink and blue. But now I usually buy clothes with black, grey and white.
I am not a fashionista and I don’t know newest fashion trend so much.
For three to four years, skinny pants are very popular.
Many women are wearing skinny pants.
These are comfortable to be active and let people look charming.
But these days, skinny pants are changing bootcut or wide pants.
These pants were in fashion tewnty years ago.
Many people say that trend goes around comes around.
I agree with the proverb completely.
In the past, I enjoyed wearing bright colors such as red, pink and blue. But now I usually buy clothes with black, grey and white.
I am not a fashionista and I don’t know newest fashion trend so much.
For three to four years, skinny pants are very popular.
Many women are wearing skinny pants.
These are comfortable to be active and let people look charming.
But these days, skinny pants are changing bootcut or wide pants.
These pants were in fashion tewnty years ago.
Many people say that trend goes around comes around.
I agree with the proverb completely.
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