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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 17 조회 12976

My Family

작성자: 1102013615 담당 튜터: Christie
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I am Marred, there are 4 people in my family, my wife, my tow sons and me.

my wife is 49 years old he is public servant

my first son is 25 years old, second son is 21 years old.

I usually tend to go jogging and hiking on the weekend.

Also I like watch a movie with my family.

I love my family.
튜터 교정 답변

I am married, there are 4 people in my family, my wife, my two sons and me.

My wife is 49 years old and she is a public servant

My first son is 25 years old, and my second son is 21 years old.

I usually like to go jogging and hiking on the weekend.

Also I like to watch movies with my family.

I love my family.

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