My Family
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I am Marred, there are 4 people in my family, my wife, my tow sons and me.
my wife is 49 years old he is public servant
my first son is 25 years old, second son is 21 years old.
I usually tend to go jogging and hiking on the weekend.
Also I like watch a movie with my family.
I love my family.
my wife is 49 years old he is public servant
my first son is 25 years old, second son is 21 years old.
I usually tend to go jogging and hiking on the weekend.
Also I like watch a movie with my family.
I love my family.
튜터 교정 답변
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