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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 17 조회 12854

My Neighborhood

작성자: 1102013615 담당 튜터: Christie
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Let me tell you about my Neighborhood.

I live in an apartment in Dunchon-Dong.

My neighborhood is very calm and peaceful.

There are two restaurants a couple of bank and a big mall.

So I often go there with my family during the weekend.

I don't have to worry about safety and noise problem at all.

I think it makes my life more convenient.
튜터 교정 답변

Let me tell you about my Neighborhood.

I live in an apartment in Dunchon-Dong.

My neighborhood is very calm and peaceful.

There are two restaurants and a couple of banks and a big mall.

So I often go there with my family during the weekend.

I don't have to worry about safety and noise problem at all.

I think it makes my life more convenient.

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