My Neighborhood
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학생 제출 원문
Let me tell you about my Neighborhood.
I live in an apartment in Dunchon-Dong.
My neighborhood is very calm and peaceful.
There are two restaurants a couple of bank and a big mall.
So I often go there with my family during the weekend.
I don't have to worry about safety and noise problem at all.
I think it makes my life more convenient.
I live in an apartment in Dunchon-Dong.
My neighborhood is very calm and peaceful.
There are two restaurants a couple of bank and a big mall.
So I often go there with my family during the weekend.
I don't have to worry about safety and noise problem at all.
I think it makes my life more convenient.
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