Takes in office 1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I am an introvert. I don't think my personality perfectly maches my job. But sometimes my job maches a few my personality. Usually I have to meet a lot of customer in my company. I need to talk about my job. They went me to work what they asked about system. I explain there are a lot of reasons I could work too hard. And I have to hear what they ask with patience. So I get stresses and I get tired. However, since my job is interesting and I lean a lot. I can say it's worthwhile. Since I feel a stress so much, I have to relieve my stress when I work in office. So I decided to have new hobby, I joined in-comany society of tennis club. I had to know so many people my tennis club. I could not only relieve my stress but also be health better then through new hobby. Right now I still love my job and I play tennis.
튜터 교정 답변
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