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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 19 조회 12064

help, please

작성자: 1100632765 담당 튜터: Hunter1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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To eat out with my friends, I always pay attention to food quality and price.
First, I ask my friends what they want to eat out and where they go to the restaurant.
We find god places as possible as we can.
If we don’t decide proper place, we have help from aother people or internet.
When I am looking for restaurant, I always check the food material whether the country of orgin is domestic or foreign.
I try to choose the restaurant using domestic material.
Second, I also concern about food price.
I don't want pay beyond the limit of my ability.
I order the food of reasonable price.
And I am happy if we have our own quite separte space in restaurant.
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Excellent, Rose! Please review the edits below :))

When eating out with my friends, I always pay attention to food quality and price.
First, I ask my friends what they want to eat, and where they would like to go.
We try to find the best possible restaurant.
If we can't decide, we have help from other people or the internet.
When I am looking for a restaurant, I always check whether the origin of ingredients is domestic or foreign.
I try to choose the restaurant using domestic ingredients.
Second, I am also concerned about food price.
I don't want to pay beyond the limit of my ability.
I order food that is reasonably priced.
I am happy if we have our own quiet, separte space in the restaurant.

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