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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 20 조회 12214

help, please

작성자: 1100632765 담당 튜터: Hunter1
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If we live in apartment, we separate recycling such as paper, plastic, bottles and general waste and put them into each trash bins.
But if you live in single-family house, you ought to buy garbage bag at mart or store and sort recycling and waste.
You have to put waste into garbage bag.
If you put the garbage bag in the trash collection site, street cleaners collect them early morning everyday.
But food waste is collected on designated days.
Sometimes, you need to throw big things, like furniture, sofa, drawer, electric appliance, refrigerater, television and so on.
This time you go to community center around your house to buy a sticker and you put it on those things and keep them on designated sites and the street cleaners collect them.
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Great job, Rose!

If we live in an apartment, we separate recycling such as paper, plastic, glass and general waste, and put them into each trash bin.
But if you live in a single-family house, you ought to buy  garbage bags at the store and sort the recycling and waste.
You have to put waste into the garbage bag.
If you put the garbage bag in the trash collection site, street cleaners collect them early in the morning everyday.
But food waste is collected on designated days.
Sometimes, you need to throw away big things, like furniture, or appliances.
In this case, you have to go to the community center in your area to buy a sticker, and you put it on those things, keep them on designated sites, and the street cleaners collect them.

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