My Neighbors
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I live in an apartment complex.
I have a good neighbor. his name is Joung. and he lives upstairs from me.
we have a similar taste in movies. So I’ve met him once a month to go to the movies together.
after watching movie, we usually talk about the plots and characters.
he has bright and positive mind. So when I have trouble he usually advices me.
And I also sometimes advice him. So we are very close to each other.
These are the reasons why I want to go to the movies with Joung.
I have a good neighbor. his name is Joung. and he lives upstairs from me.
we have a similar taste in movies. So I’ve met him once a month to go to the movies together.
after watching movie, we usually talk about the plots and characters.
he has bright and positive mind. So when I have trouble he usually advices me.
And I also sometimes advice him. So we are very close to each other.
These are the reasons why I want to go to the movies with Joung.
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