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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 05. 23 조회 12925

My Weekend

작성자: 1102013615 담당 튜터: Christie
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I usually hang out With my friends on weekends.
There is nothing like a good chat with my best friends to relieve the Stress.
I like going to Myeongdong because there are many large malls where I can enjoy shopping
and have a nice meal.
I usually like to go jogging and hiking on the weekend.

Also I like to watch movies with my family.
But Sometimes, I just stay at home and order a fried chicken or
Pizza delivered while watching a movie.
튜터 교정 답변

I usually hang out with my friends on weekends.
There is nothing like a good chat with my best friends to relieve stress.
I like going to Myeongdong because there are many large malls where I can enjoy shopping
and have a nice meal.
I usually like to go jogging and hiking on the weekend.

Also,  I like to watch movies with my family.
But sometimes I just stay at home and order fried chicken or
pizza delivered while watching a movie.

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