help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I always watch the news and read the newspaper.
The reasons are why I enjoy watching the news.
First, I want to know what happen in the country and world.
Through the news and newspaper, I know about many happenings and informations, like political, economic, social events.
sometimes those news help my job.
Especially I want to know what they are doing central government and other provinces.
If their policies are good, we make use of their strong point.
Second, I organize my thoughts by reading professionals’ editorial, critical article through the paper.
The reasons are why I enjoy watching the news.
First, I want to know what happen in the country and world.
Through the news and newspaper, I know about many happenings and informations, like political, economic, social events.
sometimes those news help my job.
Especially I want to know what they are doing central government and other provinces.
If their policies are good, we make use of their strong point.
Second, I organize my thoughts by reading professionals’ editorial, critical article through the paper.
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