My house
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I live in a mid-sized apartment with my family.
It has a bathroom, a kitchen, a living room, and three bedrooms.
My daughters use the biggest bedroom.
My wife and I are in another, and the last one is a study.
My daughters’room has a bunk bed, a desk, a chair, a bookshelf, and a closet.
There is a double bed, a closet, a television in my room.
The study is a desk, a chair, a bookshelf, a desktop computer.
My old daughter always study in the study, So I study in the living room.
In the living room, there is a large TV, a bookshelf, a laptop computer, a sofa.
The living room is my resting place, so I spend a lot of time there.
It has a bathroom, a kitchen, a living room, and three bedrooms.
My daughters use the biggest bedroom.
My wife and I are in another, and the last one is a study.
My daughters’room has a bunk bed, a desk, a chair, a bookshelf, and a closet.
There is a double bed, a closet, a television in my room.
The study is a desk, a chair, a bookshelf, a desktop computer.
My old daughter always study in the study, So I study in the living room.
In the living room, there is a large TV, a bookshelf, a laptop computer, a sofa.
The living room is my resting place, so I spend a lot of time there.
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