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help, please

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Hi! Leejun. You said a minute ago that you have an appoinment this weekend. But I can’t understand why you have.
This weekend is our twentieth wedding anniversary so I have a plan to eat out at luxury restaurant with our kids. I want to know a few things.
First, who do you have an appointment with?
Second, is the appoinment important?
Is it on business or friendship meeting?
If the latter is, can tou pospone the appoinment?
Third, are you going to just talk or do something such as having a meal?
Lastly, when do you expect to finish the meeting?
Let me know your answer as soon as possible.
튜터 교정 답변

Great job, Rose!

Hi! Leejun. You said a minute ago that you have an appoinment this weekend, but I can’t understand why.
This weekend is our twentieth wedding anniversary, so I have a plan to eat out at a luxury restaurant with our kids. I want to know a few things.
First, who do you have an appointment with?
Second, is the appoinment important?
Is it a business or friendly meeting?
If it is the latter, can you pospone the appoinment?
Third, are you going to just talk, or do something like have a meal?
Lastly, when do you expect to finish the meeting?
Let me know your answer as soon as possible.

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