Teacher Cen, I hope that you feel better soon~!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear, Cen
I was happy to join this class tonight.
But you have a cold, it's worrying.
I want you to be better a cold.
By the way, I have something to impart to you.
When I heard audio recordings again, I could know more.
Because your voice sounds more loud and clear.
In the recording, My voice sounds is small,too.
You also couldn't hear my voice nevertheless you catched on that.
In addtion you gave praise. I appreciate it.
I hope you'll always be healthy.
God bless you. Goodnight~!
I was happy to join this class tonight.
But you have a cold, it's worrying.
I want you to be better a cold.
By the way, I have something to impart to you.
When I heard audio recordings again, I could know more.
Because your voice sounds more loud and clear.
In the recording, My voice sounds is small,too.
You also couldn't hear my voice nevertheless you catched on that.
In addtion you gave praise. I appreciate it.
I hope you'll always be healthy.
God bless you. Goodnight~!
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