help, please
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Hello! Yaeran. This is youngsook speaking.
I am happy to hear your voice after a long time.
How have you been? I am going to visit Seattle next month?
I don’t know about Seattle exceptthe movie “Sleepless in Seattle” starring Tom Hanks and Meg Ryan.
So I'd like to know about that place. If you have time, please answer the questions.
First, Does Seattle often rain and people feel much more gloomy than other cities?
Second, I heared that Seattle is near to Canada and many Canadian come and go to Seattle for shopping and playing.
If I visit Seattle, is I possible for me to tour to Canada.
Lastly, I know that Seattle is famous for Starbucks’s head office. I love coffee so I want to buy good tasty coffee. Can you recommand a shop or store to buy coffee?
If I arrive Seattle as soon as possible, I’ll contact with you.
I am happy to hear your voice after a long time.
How have you been? I am going to visit Seattle next month?
I don’t know about Seattle exceptthe movie “Sleepless in Seattle” starring Tom Hanks and Meg Ryan.
So I'd like to know about that place. If you have time, please answer the questions.
First, Does Seattle often rain and people feel much more gloomy than other cities?
Second, I heared that Seattle is near to Canada and many Canadian come and go to Seattle for shopping and playing.
If I visit Seattle, is I possible for me to tour to Canada.
Lastly, I know that Seattle is famous for Starbucks’s head office. I love coffee so I want to buy good tasty coffee. Can you recommand a shop or store to buy coffee?
If I arrive Seattle as soon as possible, I’ll contact with you.
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