help, please
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello! Leejun. This is youngsook speaking.
I’m calling to know whether you’d like to go to see a baseball game.
The Samsung against Hanhwa game is due to next weekend.
The two teams are outsanding this season.
I have two tickets for the game.
I hope that we altogether go to the stadium.
The baseball stadium was built recently in modern.
If we cheer for our team, we can get rid of stress and have a good weekend. You won’t regret it.
If we are hungry, we can buy the fried chicken and junk food in snack bar.
I’ll see you at 5 p.m in the subway exit No. 8 next Saturday
I’m calling to know whether you’d like to go to see a baseball game.
The Samsung against Hanhwa game is due to next weekend.
The two teams are outsanding this season.
I have two tickets for the game.
I hope that we altogether go to the stadium.
The baseball stadium was built recently in modern.
If we cheer for our team, we can get rid of stress and have a good weekend. You won’t regret it.
If we are hungry, we can buy the fried chicken and junk food in snack bar.
I’ll see you at 5 p.m in the subway exit No. 8 next Saturday
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