Overseas busniss trip 1
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학생 제출 원문
I'd like to tell you about my first overseas business trip. 15 years ago, I first want to go on a business trip abroad. I want to china. Our company is pretty big company all over the world named SAMSUNG. Our company had a lot of branch office all over the world. Such as China, Euroup, America and so on. At that time, I developed a new maunewfacturing system by my self. Our coworker who he worked in china office. He saw my a new system. He asked me set up a new system at the china office. My boss ordered me go to China, I was told to China. I completed it sucessful. I first visited China and I never could speak Chiness. So I needed interpreter. I got to help interpreter. He helped me with work. He was very younger and smart. And he take me to attrection site for an weekend. I enjoyed seeing beutifull site. There was nothing inconvient. We took pictures with him. We spent happy time together. My first oversea busniess trip ended up being a very enjoyable one thank for him.
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