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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 13 조회 14522

My Stress

작성자: pos600333 담당 튜터: Jasmine1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I have little stress to say about.
First stress is a financial problem. In this month, there are many events such as parents' day, children's day etc. So, I should spend more money than in other normal months, and the spending went over my budget.
Second, I and my wife are trying to have our baby. It is large burden to us.

Most troubles or worries cannot be solved by our consideration. Then, it is wise to forget enjoying everyday life.
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I have little stress to say talk about. First stress is a financial problem. In this month, there are many events such as parents' day, children's day etc. So, I should spend more money than in other normal months, and the spending went over my budget. Second, I and my wife are trying to have our baby. It is a large burden to on us. Most troubles or  and worries cannot be solved by our consideration. Then Therefore, it is wise to forget enjoying everyday life.

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It's wise to forget enjoying everyday life? I hope I misunderstood you.

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