help me, please!
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I think that the housing market in Korea is mad in thease days.
Even for those work hard, it's not easy to buy house. The house prices are getting higher and
If you wake up in the morning, you could be surptised at the news.
One of my collegues bought an apartment with a morgage from bank near my house two years ago and
she sold it 150 thousand dollars at a profit recently.
The general workers like me hardly save amount of money in their lives so they lose their heart whenever they hear those kinds of news. If you speculate real estate and ypu have a good fortune, you could make much money than hard-working people. That's sad reality.
Taegu is the greatest increase housing prices throughout the country.
Even for those work hard, it's not easy to buy house. The house prices are getting higher and
If you wake up in the morning, you could be surptised at the news.
One of my collegues bought an apartment with a morgage from bank near my house two years ago and
she sold it 150 thousand dollars at a profit recently.
The general workers like me hardly save amount of money in their lives so they lose their heart whenever they hear those kinds of news. If you speculate real estate and ypu have a good fortune, you could make much money than hard-working people. That's sad reality.
Taegu is the greatest increase housing prices throughout the country.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!