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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 06. 01 조회 13096

My Favorite Actor-Actress

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I like Natalie Portman the best. She's favorite actress because she can play different character types. She also has a very unique face. The most memorable movie I've seen is Black Swan.Natalie Portman had the leading role.She was very beautiful in the movie.
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I like Natalie Portman the best.

She's my favorite actress because she can play different character types.

She also has a very unique face.

The most memorable movie I've seen is Black Swan.

Natalie Portman had the leading role.

She was very beautiful in the movie.

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